How I look at another essay...

I read about a group of kids misbehaving in a harmful way. They were misbehaving and then recording it to put it onto the internet, just so that other kids can see how "cool" they were. I read about how they were doing all of these things just for social status. The way the author wrote this essay he was blaming other students for these students behaviors. I also noticed that he felt really strong about this topic and he really wanted every to know what these kids were doing. I think that maybe he wanted people to see what other kids were doing so that they can stop their kids from doing it or maybe even prevent their own kids from doing it. 

I noticed that the author gave a lot of good facts. He even added names of people who have tried to get involved. I also noticed that he cared a great deal about this topic. He wanted everyone to know what these kids where doing, he wanted parents to see what these kids where up to. I love how he began the essay, he started out with a scene of kids misbehaving. He even quoted a grown man who is known just for misbehaving on the internet. He quoted him saying how he just wanted to be known throughout the world, even if it is for something dumb.

I wonder if the author could give more quotes so that we can see how other kids feel about doing this to be "cool".

An essay is.

An essay to me is a well organized collection of factual information. Whenever I write an essay I make sure that I write a five paragraph essay. I prefer five paragraph essays because I feel that I can add in as much information as possible. I feel that by being able to add more facts you can allow the reader to understand more about the topic and more about your feelings towards the topic. The reader can also understand more and more about how they feel about the Topic.

My favorite type of essay contains five paragraphs, the first is called an introduction. This is where the author introduces the topic and states their opinion on the topic. They also briefly state why. And they make sure to explain the topic in detail. The second, third and fourth paragraphs are called body paragraphs. They give detailed facts explaining why they feel the way they feel. The last paragraph is called the conclusion, this is where the writer finishes their essay and they sum up all of the information and they walk away satisfied that anyone who reads this paper will agree with the one hundred percent.

I love writing essays. I am going to write my next essay on love at first site.

In this essay I am going to explain what it means to be in love and how many
people feel different things when it comes to love. I am going to state my
feelings on the term "Love at first sight" and then I am going to give three
paragraphs worth of supporting details and then I will end my essay. I hope
that by the end of my essay anyone reading it will either agree with me or
completely understand my point of view and why.
The reason I decided to write my next essay on love at first site is because
I hear a lot of people saying things like, "oh, well we met here and there and it
was just love at first sight. I sometimes feel that people are in lust not in love. I
remember when I first fell in love. Me and my boyfriend Marcos met through a old
friend of mine. I kissed him three days after meeting him, and now we have a year
and a month together. Although we fight a lot of the time, I have been very happy
with him. That doesn't mean that we were always happy, oh no, we were once
out of love.
At one point in time love like feelings for each other. Well he thought that
he was in love but it was actually lust. I knew from the start that I didn't love
him, but something in my heart said to try to stick around and I might find the
man of my dreams. And I might even fall in love. I did what my heart said and
I fell in love with him. That is why I feel that some people just mistake lust for
love. And I want to figure out why. So I am going to write an essay on it.
In conclusion anyone can write an essay on anything you just have to give
details and support yourself one hundred percent of the way.